feedback on final rough cut

after viewing our rough cut in front of the class we have decided some essential elements of our sequence which must be changed. people could understand our genre but the shots were confusing and out of place. speech during filming was unnecessary and it will be edited out. the shots need to be replaced and put in an order which does not confuse viewers, or else our sequence will not deliver the desired effect. titles and production companies need to be edited in to our sequence, as well as production and distribution companies. a voiceover will be made to help the audience understand our shots as during a shot a smaller flashback shot is used to tell the story. our characters need to be introduced using a freeze frame and a lot of running is used in our clips to show panic, fear and adrenaline. the class decided that there was a bit too much, so this will be edited out. thank you to the class for the feedback we hope we can deliver a sequence which yoiu will enjoy.

damien on behalf of group q2 45